anon crit post + some sticky stuff

kinda fay
I always forget to post on [info]cfud_concrit, so if you have to something to say, just drop it on here. Anon, screened, and whatnot.

ALSO! Some important-ish stuff: stats/permissions, player meme, app

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AUGUST THREADS

i liek pumpkins
Cut cut! )

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College...

kinda fay
Like bunches of other people, I'm calling a full hiatus from August 25 - September 8 for moving to school reasons. That might shift into a semi-hiatus or I might break it any day after the 27th depending on how fast I get used to college.

Hey! So, Boston. There's lots of college kids there, right? I'm gonna be one of those freshmen who don't know anyone at their new school, so uh, anyone want to hang out/show me around the city? We can have coffee or something.

ETA: Extending hiatus all the way til September 25. Getting used to college is hard.

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he's a fanboy
RELATIONSHIP/FIRST IMPRESSIONS MEME

I know Crowley hasn't met too many people, but I wanna do one anyway! Comment with characters, though, because I have trouble remembering if one person plays more than one character and stuff like that. Hitting back would be kind of cool, too. 8D

Open for forever.

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CFUW 58: Zexion

hola
This may be too late to be useful, but I have something to tell you anyway, Zexion.

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JULY THREADS

K.O.
At first I was like thread tracking? Who needs thread tracking! Then I realized how forgetful I am. orz

Cut for length. )

I hope I got everything. I'll try and record them as I do them for now on.

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player meme

LA LA LA
Me: My RL journal is [info]pomgrenadier but it's not very interesting.

I play: Just Crowley!

Available on: If I'm on the computer, I am always on Gtalk (romylin) and if I'm actively playing, I try to get in IRC.

Timezone/Language: EST, but for the summer I become nocturnal. English is my first language, mais j'aime parler le francais, meme si je ne peux pas le parler bien et je ne sais pas comment on type les accents. I can also understand Chinese, but I'm illiterate. |D

The playing experience: Having fun! This is my first RP.

Thread Jumping: Please! It's exciting. I'll probably do it, too.

Crack vs Emo: Both are fine by me. It's extraordinarily easy to get Crowley into either situation.

Goals: Make some friends and intro Innocence!Crowley someday.

Comfort Levels: Anything. Really.

Betaing: I'm probably bad at betaing, but I'm always willing to do it! I think I'd be pretty fast at it, too, so you can just email it to me whenever.

AUs: Ahahaha, sure? Again, I'm inexperienced with RP but who'd wanna AU with Crowley is more my question...

Pimping: I probably won't. DGM's pretty popular anyway.

Concrit: Always appreciated, good or bad.

Other: My threads drop faster than flies. Just let me know somehow, on IRC, or email, or whatever, if you want me to pick up.

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stats/permissions

kinda fay
Age: 28
Height: 190 cm, 6'3"
Weight: 77 kg, 180 lb
Medical Info: Probably has a super strong immune system. I mean, it can take care of the Akuma virus, and he's lived all alone without needing a doctor, so it's probably preeetttyyy strong.

Eyes: Dark brown
Hair: Mostly dark brown, spiky in the back, white unibang

Physical traits: Looks like a vampire: really pale, dark lips (is it lipstick? ...hope not), pointy ears, really big and sharp, impressive looking fangs/teeth. Seemingly no eyebrows? Also, he smells sweet, like flowers. Hairy legs. |D

What's Okay To Mention Around Him/Her: Anything! If you mention Eliade, he'll emo all over you, though.

Abilities: O-okay, his Innocence gives him plenty of abilities, but his Innocence is only activated in the presence of Akuma and their blood. Not that there are any Akuma in camp, but... Okay. When he's high on Innocence, he gets really cocky. He has super strength/speed and likes to bite. He can also take his blood and wrap it around his hands to form sharp gauntlets. In times of extreme desperation, he can remove the blood in his body and create a kind of clone, made entirely of his own blood, to fight for him.

Notes for the Psychics: Not much. Probably thinks a lot about Eliade, though.

Can I shapeshift/bodyswap/spit at/step on/etc?: Yes! I wanna bodyswap with someone...

Hugs/kisses/other affection/etc: GO FOR IT.

Maim/Murder/Death: No, for now. He needs to get his hands on some blood.

Cooking: Actually, yes! He's lived alone with a huge kitchen, probably full of exotic ingredients and utensils, so he's had lots of time to experiment, and can whip up a good meal.

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ugly cute
I WANT TO GIVE A BIG THANK YOU TO ALL MY BETAS.


Character name: Aleister Crowley III/Arystar Krory III
Series: D.Gray-man
Age: 28
Job: Nurse
Canon: D.Gray-man's about a bunch of exorcists who fight against the Millennium Earl and his demons (aka Akuma) with their weapons made of Innocence.

Crowley looks like a bad Dracula stereotype. Gaunt face, slick, black hair, flowing, black cape, the works. With an appearance like that, it's kind of funny how he's an exorcist, but even his Innocence is vampiric in nature. Crowley uses his fangs to bite and drain the enemy of their blood. People back in the Victorian age were mighty superstitious, so it's no surprise that he grew up alone and friendless. While that could have made him into a self-righteous, independent, tough guy, it did the exact opposite. He's naive, polite, gullible, sheltered and a crybaby who has no shame in his tears. That's not to say Crowley wallows in his own self-pity though. He's a real trooper, trying to experience the real world, and always willing to be conned into try new things.


Sample Entry:

My name is Aleister Crowley and I am Camp Fuck You Die’s new nurse. I... admit, I have never held a "normal" occupation before, nor do I have any experience in the medical field. So, I am at a loss as to what exactly qualifies me to be a nurse. Oh, but I do understand that this camp suffers from a lack of resources.

You see, my job responsibilities include drawing blood samples from and administering injections to the camp population. I expected some syringes, needles, et cetera, at my disposal. However, the only equipment I received was a bright pink "sippy straw" and this wine glass. ...I felt I was being mocked. I-It’s understandable, after all. This vampire-like form... S-surely I would frighten all the poor children... Even most adults fear me, and people hate what they fear. But then I thoroughly read the attached letter of employment.

It was a heart-wrenching letter. Penned in crude, nearly illegible script, smeared with a mysterious, brown substance, and smelling strongly of bananas; to think that one could be so busy with work that one must eat on the job! Madame Director’s secretary must work in dire conditions. I also hear that Madame’s secretaries go door-to-door each morning to wake the children up for their morning meal. The staff readily ensures that all campers enjoy a communal breakfast, with all of their friends, while the secretaries must eat a meager meal of bananas, isolated at their desks. It’s probable that they do not even have desks. This paper is awfully crinkled.

Despite all these hardships, I can tell that Madame Director is trying to take care of everything. The letter of employment explained that everyone here is very susceptible to a multitude of viruses. While not deadly, these viruses are a great inconvenience and no matter what, you cannot naturally develop immunity. That’s when I come in. I'm to deliver blood samples to Madame's staff, who will isolate the viruses in the blood and create special injections. By "injections," I am sure they mean "vaccinations," so not to worry! The staff will weaken, or kill, the virus before they make me inject it into you. Otherwise, I would just be infecting everyone! And I am sure that the last thing Madame Director wants is to make everyone more miserable than they already are.

I realize now that it was foolish of me to be offended by the available equipment. Everyone is trying their best, so I have to cope as well. ...Even if this uniform is a bit small. I am not accustomed to wearing all white or to wearing a dress, but everyone has their different customs, which I respect. When someone offers their hand, you shake it. If someone bows to you, you do the same. First impressions are important, and I have found that it is easy to figure out the appropriate behavior through mimicry. Oh, here comes someone now!

... H-hellooooooo, GORILLA! You don’t have to call me "Nurse" if you don’t want to, just "Crowley" is fine.

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